Post by SuzuCupcake on Jun 20, 2012 9:36:30 GMT -5
JUST in case I am not around when you get back from your class. I made some proof readings and found some things I would personally like answering <3
1.On your character application the 'species name list' link doesn't work~ It just can't find the page so it cannot load. Easy enough to sort out I think, but it leads me onto my second point.
2. I am personally a little confused to if there should already be a description for other species. IE. We all know what humans are like, but maybe it might help to add a few more ideas in there about vampires, demons, crocodiles etc. Might just give people a bit more choice if they don't fancy writing up the species for themselves. Everyone likes rules to go by, yes?
3. I think this is my own personal hate - and I know it doesn't like me - But Proboards is a bit funny about putting on a rating for the site. I suggest if there is going to be bloodshed, torture, sex or slavery in general it might help to have a huge sign saying: WE DO THIS STUFF HERE BITCHES; as I notice it doesn't state what the site is in the rules.
(I suggest if things get pissy you might move to a different host - jcink is especially good for multi-character sights, and tolerates a bit of violence. though the coding is a little different it's rather simple to pick up)
4. THANK YOU FOR HAVING A LIBRARY! almost every place I go always forgets about them and I end up smacking them.
5. Not sure if i'm being stupid or not, but I can't seem to find any information about the groups other than the bit in the plot about the scarrnecks. It might be useful to place up a post about what the different groups are interested in. I get that the board want to stay in power with the money but the rebels want to bring them down? Get rich too? Stop slavery? Maybe just put those in power into slavery for revenge? Goals would be helpful for me :)
I think this is everything I have come across so far <3 But all in all I'm excited. If you want some help or anything, just poke me~
1.On your character application the 'species name list' link doesn't work~ It just can't find the page so it cannot load. Easy enough to sort out I think, but it leads me onto my second point.
2. I am personally a little confused to if there should already be a description for other species. IE. We all know what humans are like, but maybe it might help to add a few more ideas in there about vampires, demons, crocodiles etc. Might just give people a bit more choice if they don't fancy writing up the species for themselves. Everyone likes rules to go by, yes?
3. I think this is my own personal hate - and I know it doesn't like me - But Proboards is a bit funny about putting on a rating for the site. I suggest if there is going to be bloodshed, torture, sex or slavery in general it might help to have a huge sign saying: WE DO THIS STUFF HERE BITCHES; as I notice it doesn't state what the site is in the rules.
(I suggest if things get pissy you might move to a different host - jcink is especially good for multi-character sights, and tolerates a bit of violence. though the coding is a little different it's rather simple to pick up)
4. THANK YOU FOR HAVING A LIBRARY! almost every place I go always forgets about them and I end up smacking them.
5. Not sure if i'm being stupid or not, but I can't seem to find any information about the groups other than the bit in the plot about the scarrnecks. It might be useful to place up a post about what the different groups are interested in. I get that the board want to stay in power with the money but the rebels want to bring them down? Get rich too? Stop slavery? Maybe just put those in power into slavery for revenge? Goals would be helpful for me :)
I think this is everything I have come across so far <3 But all in all I'm excited. If you want some help or anything, just poke me~